Post by Myn Corstar on Feb 1, 2007 9:50:22 GMT -5
Name: Lord Kieran Eitan
Race: Human
Age: 38
Height: 5'9"
Weight: 212lbs
Appearance:
Black Hair, Brown Eyes, Medium Build
Birth place: Corellia
Faction: Dark Jedi
Rank: Dark Jedi Master
Bio:
Kieran Eitan was born on Corellia, to a wealthy family. As an only child, he received the undivided attention of both of his parents, who had risen to power due to both politics and business. At three, he was discovered by the Jedi and taken away from his parents, who lodged formal complaints against the Jedi and had ever since then lobbied against the Jedi.
Kieran was brought up as a jedi fairly quickly, his force perception and skills being considerably higher than most. He had a major weakness that nearly made him fail the trails to becoming a Jedi Knight however. He couldn’t use any form of telekinesis. This handicap set him back, when other students could use the force to propel themselves, or objects, the most he could do is re energize himself using the force, increasing his own stamina. Kieran’s strongest point was his dueling. He would spend hours before his training exercises, working on his favorite form, Form III. He toyed with mixing Ataru and Soresu together, making a fairly versatile fighting style. He was one of the youngest Jedi to construct a lightsaber.
When he reached the trials, he passed the bar, although just barely. His force progression had been rather weak compared to other students, while he excelled in the combatant portions of the trials. After being made a Knight, Kieran continued to study Soresu, becoming one of the most proficient Jedi in the galaxy in the defensive form.
Kieran was never completely satisfied with the path the Jedi Order took. He spent a good portion of his early life with his Master in the outer rim, watching the political corruption that had reached even the farthest star systems. He spoke and gave lectures several times in the jedi temple, speaking on the pros and cons to the governmental systems that had been implemented.
At 32, Kieran was made a Jedi Master, after courage and bravery on a mission to Nar Shadda. Kieran had single-handedly captured an entire Mercenary faction that had been working to hunt down Jedi and sell their lightsabers on the black market.
When Kieran was 36, he accepted the position as a ‘Battle Master’, second only to the Grand Battle Master of which there could only be one. It was at this time when he was at his peak, that he accepted a Padawan.
Two years passed by, having numerous adventures with his padawan, Natus Mar'ain, Kieran watched the young man progress through the force, until a fateful mission to Hoth.
A civilian freighter had crash landed on Hoth and had managed to send a distress beacon, which was intercepted by a passing smuggler. The information was eventually routed to the Jedi Temple on Ossus and was handed down to the pair of Jedi. The first mistake was believing the smuggler’s story. The second was actually going to Hoth.
Kieran and Natus arrived on Hoth in their starfighters and found the remains of a ship near an old decommissioned Military base. Following a trail of evidence to the base, the Jedi were ambushed and wounded. Kieran losing a portion of his right arm to a mine, Natus losing the ability to use his legs. Natus used the force to push strength into himself, making his legs work. The young Jedi Padawan charged the onslaught of Bounty Hunters, giving himself into the force as he attacked. The young man survived for several minutes, downing many foes before finally falling. The extreme use of the force had drained and eventually had killed him. The entire scene was witnessed by Kieran, who could neither retreat nor advance, due to using his left hand to defend, he held a half a platoon of Bounty Hunters at bay, sending their shots directly back at them.
Watching the death of his padawan struck a chord. The darkness tugged at Kieran’s heart and pulled him in as he felt himself weakening. He gave into his hatred and anger, allowing himself to touch the minds of all the beings in the room and completely obliterate them. The mental force shockwave killed almost every living thing for nearly a square mile in each direction. The Jedi Master collected his Padawan’s yellow lightsaber and built a pyre, on which he burned the body. Leaving Hoth on a Bounty Hunter freighter, Kieran began his trip down the path of darkness. Leaving none in his wake alive.
Items
2x Lightsabers – Two Dual Phase Lightsabers, A silver and yellow one, constructed by Kieran Eitan and by Natus Mar'ain respectively. Both going between 90 to 300cms in length. Both Lightsabers use Durindfire crystals.
1x Light Combat Robe – A light grey robe that protects the wearer’s modesty and provides light protection against chemicals and kinetic weapons.
1x Prothesthic Arm – A humanoid arm attached to Miran’s right forearm. Covered in a flesh-like polymer so it’s parts do not scare little children.
Skills
Kieran Eitan is a very skilled user in the forms of Soresu and Niman, using hints of Ataru and Vaapad for athletic movement.
Powers:
Kieran is very strong in the telepathic arena, allowing him the ability to influence minds and destroy them. Due to a Halcyon heiritage, Kieran has a somewhat unique gift among Jedi and Sith both. He can absorb most types of Energy through his skin [in some cases, receiving life threatening burns] and convert it into pure force energy, opening the full tier of the darkside to his willpower.
Affect Mind *****
Absorb Energy *****
Physical Strength (ability to lift objects, and overall muscle mass)
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1 2 3 4 [5] 6 7 8 9 10
Mind Power (this includes knowledge/wisdom/strategy)
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1 2 3 4 5 6 7 [8] 9 10
Force Aptitude (the ability to listen, and use the force)
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1 2 3 4 5 6 [7] 8 9 10
Speed (covers agility, quickness, and overall speed)
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1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 [9] 10
Swordsmanship (covers Lightsabers, and melee weapons)
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1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 [10]
Weapons (covers all other weapons, blasters and the like)
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[1] 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
Force Alignment
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5 [4] 3 2 1 0 1 2 3 4 5
[[OOC: If you accept this character, I gotta ask now. What is my leeway in taking over the galaxy? I've done it in other sims *coughFallofthejedicough*, but I'm curious on how much leeway I can/could have.]]
Race: Human
Age: 38
Height: 5'9"
Weight: 212lbs
Appearance:
Black Hair, Brown Eyes, Medium Build
Birth place: Corellia
Faction: Dark Jedi
Rank: Dark Jedi Master
Bio:
Kieran Eitan was born on Corellia, to a wealthy family. As an only child, he received the undivided attention of both of his parents, who had risen to power due to both politics and business. At three, he was discovered by the Jedi and taken away from his parents, who lodged formal complaints against the Jedi and had ever since then lobbied against the Jedi.
Kieran was brought up as a jedi fairly quickly, his force perception and skills being considerably higher than most. He had a major weakness that nearly made him fail the trails to becoming a Jedi Knight however. He couldn’t use any form of telekinesis. This handicap set him back, when other students could use the force to propel themselves, or objects, the most he could do is re energize himself using the force, increasing his own stamina. Kieran’s strongest point was his dueling. He would spend hours before his training exercises, working on his favorite form, Form III. He toyed with mixing Ataru and Soresu together, making a fairly versatile fighting style. He was one of the youngest Jedi to construct a lightsaber.
When he reached the trials, he passed the bar, although just barely. His force progression had been rather weak compared to other students, while he excelled in the combatant portions of the trials. After being made a Knight, Kieran continued to study Soresu, becoming one of the most proficient Jedi in the galaxy in the defensive form.
Kieran was never completely satisfied with the path the Jedi Order took. He spent a good portion of his early life with his Master in the outer rim, watching the political corruption that had reached even the farthest star systems. He spoke and gave lectures several times in the jedi temple, speaking on the pros and cons to the governmental systems that had been implemented.
At 32, Kieran was made a Jedi Master, after courage and bravery on a mission to Nar Shadda. Kieran had single-handedly captured an entire Mercenary faction that had been working to hunt down Jedi and sell their lightsabers on the black market.
When Kieran was 36, he accepted the position as a ‘Battle Master’, second only to the Grand Battle Master of which there could only be one. It was at this time when he was at his peak, that he accepted a Padawan.
Two years passed by, having numerous adventures with his padawan, Natus Mar'ain, Kieran watched the young man progress through the force, until a fateful mission to Hoth.
A civilian freighter had crash landed on Hoth and had managed to send a distress beacon, which was intercepted by a passing smuggler. The information was eventually routed to the Jedi Temple on Ossus and was handed down to the pair of Jedi. The first mistake was believing the smuggler’s story. The second was actually going to Hoth.
Kieran and Natus arrived on Hoth in their starfighters and found the remains of a ship near an old decommissioned Military base. Following a trail of evidence to the base, the Jedi were ambushed and wounded. Kieran losing a portion of his right arm to a mine, Natus losing the ability to use his legs. Natus used the force to push strength into himself, making his legs work. The young Jedi Padawan charged the onslaught of Bounty Hunters, giving himself into the force as he attacked. The young man survived for several minutes, downing many foes before finally falling. The extreme use of the force had drained and eventually had killed him. The entire scene was witnessed by Kieran, who could neither retreat nor advance, due to using his left hand to defend, he held a half a platoon of Bounty Hunters at bay, sending their shots directly back at them.
Watching the death of his padawan struck a chord. The darkness tugged at Kieran’s heart and pulled him in as he felt himself weakening. He gave into his hatred and anger, allowing himself to touch the minds of all the beings in the room and completely obliterate them. The mental force shockwave killed almost every living thing for nearly a square mile in each direction. The Jedi Master collected his Padawan’s yellow lightsaber and built a pyre, on which he burned the body. Leaving Hoth on a Bounty Hunter freighter, Kieran began his trip down the path of darkness. Leaving none in his wake alive.
Items
2x Lightsabers – Two Dual Phase Lightsabers, A silver and yellow one, constructed by Kieran Eitan and by Natus Mar'ain respectively. Both going between 90 to 300cms in length. Both Lightsabers use Durindfire crystals.
1x Light Combat Robe – A light grey robe that protects the wearer’s modesty and provides light protection against chemicals and kinetic weapons.
1x Prothesthic Arm – A humanoid arm attached to Miran’s right forearm. Covered in a flesh-like polymer so it’s parts do not scare little children.
Skills
Kieran Eitan is a very skilled user in the forms of Soresu and Niman, using hints of Ataru and Vaapad for athletic movement.
Powers:
Kieran is very strong in the telepathic arena, allowing him the ability to influence minds and destroy them. Due to a Halcyon heiritage, Kieran has a somewhat unique gift among Jedi and Sith both. He can absorb most types of Energy through his skin [in some cases, receiving life threatening burns] and convert it into pure force energy, opening the full tier of the darkside to his willpower.
Affect Mind *****
Absorb Energy *****
Physical Strength (ability to lift objects, and overall muscle mass)
--------------------------
1 2 3 4 [5] 6 7 8 9 10
Mind Power (this includes knowledge/wisdom/strategy)
-----------------------------------------------------------------------
1 2 3 4 5 6 7 [8] 9 10
Force Aptitude (the ability to listen, and use the force)
----------------------------------------------------------------------
1 2 3 4 5 6 [7] 8 9 10
Speed (covers agility, quickness, and overall speed)
-------------------------------------------------------------------
1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 [9] 10
Swordsmanship (covers Lightsabers, and melee weapons)
--------------------------------------------------------
1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 [10]
Weapons (covers all other weapons, blasters and the like)
------------------------------------------------------------------
[1] 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
Force Alignment
-------------------------
5 [4] 3 2 1 0 1 2 3 4 5
[[OOC: If you accept this character, I gotta ask now. What is my leeway in taking over the galaxy? I've done it in other sims *coughFallofthejedicough*, but I'm curious on how much leeway I can/could have.]]
