Zan Kala

[Zan kala]

Name: Zan Kala
Race: Togruta
Age: 22
Height: 6'8
Weight: lean
Appearance:

Zan wears the standard jedi robes except for a cerulean blue sash around his neck, a symbol of his old clan back on Shili
Birth place: Shili

Faction: Jedi

Rank: Youngling

Bio:
Zan is a rather shy sentient. but when he has to he can be dealy with cold black eyes. Zan is a medical prodigy, and a skilled force weilder using his incrediable hearing to his advantage he is able to strike his light saber through the air with presice pitches he can quickly induce head aches, crippling, and even small sonic booms. Though he still has much to learn Zan is eager to learn from the master

Lightsaber: Double-edged
Color: Green

[Talau]

I'm sorry, but I cannot accept you with this bio....yet.

Because your character is 22....his biographical history should be MUCH longer...what were his parent like? did he know his parents? did he grow up at the temple? how has he come to know so much of the force if he's had no master ((they only teach you so much in classes you know))...has he previously had a master? if so, what happened to him/her that makes your character need a NEW master?.....ect, ect....

also, if he's had no master before this, he cannot have anything except a training saber...so no double edged saber for him yet.

and one final thing, you need to add your stats to the bottom of you bio.