Merc Rize(WIP)

[mercury]

Name: Merc Rize
Race: Human
Age: 16
Height:6'0"
Weight:152 lbs
Appearance:
Birth place: (Planet) Alderaan

Bio: Born on Alderaan to a family of servants to the Royal Family Merc never really knew what was beyond. Merc never really was one to do what he was told. He'd goof off instead of cleaning the place with his family. One day while he was exploring the cellar of the palace he found a chest covered in dust. The chest was so old that in some spots it was rotting. He searched the drawers looking for anything worth while. As he opened up the last drawer there was only one thing left untouched no dust and no rot. It was a black wooden box. He opened the box revealing a long sivler and black handle. He examined it as if he were a scientist examining cells under a microscope. He noticed a button on it and decided to press it reavealing a glowing blade of light.

Lightsaber: Single
Color: Blue

[Cyberguy]

I'm glad you created a Jedi char, but there are a few things you should know.

1. There is no temple on Coruscant anymore

2. you wouldn't have a lightsaber yet if you've never trained.

3. We're going to need just a bit more to that Bio before we can accept you

4. You might have to wait to be found by a Jedi, since they're all in hiding.

5. I'm glad you made a character and hope to see you IC.

[The Conman]

My char needs Padiwan. So If you can...somehow get a better bio and strategically place yourself in my chars way, your golden, for me to take on as a Paddie anyways...getting accepted is up to CG.

[mercury]

I only put that as a temperary bio. I must have frgotten to say in progess on the topic. Thaks for the little tid bit of info too. And conman thanks. Once I'm done with this and get accepted I'll contact you.

[mazola]

Awesome picture BTW.

[Cyberguy]

Alright, then, we're going to need some more bio on this, but, once you get yourself down to a youngling state, and work it out with Conman as to how you get found (No just being brought to temples, sorry to say), you're good to go.

Just so you all know, Holt is going to need a padawan, too.

[The Conman]

Dood, why doesn't Holt take him and Arili take the chick that is currently on Kashyyk. Its the most logical way to work things, I think anyways. We could run into Merc on the way back to Rilia and have Holt pick him up there ( ok, that came off wrong, but you all get the idea. )

[Cyberguy]

Before anyone can take you on, you'll need a better bio.

[The Conman]

Not to rain on anyones parade or anything, but doesn't alderaan kinda...sorta...not exist anymore, on account of a very large lazor and a crazed Jedi who shall not be named?

[Morte D'Amour]

I I remember correctly, wasn't there a new Alderaan made by the new republic. Or was it by Sidious?

[Cyberguy]

Well, yeah... I might have to see some canon on that before this can be accepted...

[The Conman]

who'd they go to for a planet? did they have one in reserve ( Hitchhikers Guide)?

[Ruthless Gravity]

yup, took it right out of context because they ran out for plot...[Insert Sad Smile]