Test Duel

[roztheblindsith]

OOC: I dont mind who i fight, i just want to see how well i fight.

[Belle Morte]

*A woman with long dark hair and ethereal white skin looked on at Kane with dark honey eye's and held one of her whips up as dagger like talons extended from a gloved hand and a smile appeared on her china doll face that spoke of soon to be carnage*

Care to play

[Gh0st]

OOC: Usually when a women walks up to me with a whip and says, "Care to play" my lightsaber usually lights up too. Hehehe, sorry, couldn't reisist.

[roztheblindsith]

Kane looked up, and grinned he stood up and lit his light saber a crimson blade shot out. He took a Juyo saber stance. “Yes….I would..” Kane wait for her to make the move he wanted to spot her weaknesses before the battle started.


OOC: lol ghost….that was…epic…, and belle lets fight

[Belle Morte]

*Belle looked at the man with a cold indifference as she ran her hands quickly through her hair and tied the end off in a ponytail. With a small leer she showed a three small needles get inserted into the end of the ponytail and the second whip at her side. As a show of honor, when her ponytail touched the ground she assumed an impersonal stance with her light whip deactivated in one hand and the claw ready in the other in a Tràkata stance with her eye's half closed Lilith looked forward, her voice sounded like silk along the skin as she spoke with a psychotic gleam in her eye*

What do you think, first blood?

ooc: I've never you'd their combat system before. Lets go

[roztheblindsith]

Kane gave her a cold stare as she went into her fighting stance, He grinned and spun his lightsaber . Taking a Ataru stance. “Ladies first….” Kane said with a smirk.

[Belle Morte]

*Lilith looked at Kane and crouched, then using her bent knee to propel her towards Kane with speed with a small twist Lilith spun and activated her lightwhips with a snap-hiss and sizzle as it's Rainbow colored energy lace scathed and ground infront of her. When she was three feet infront of Kane Lilith dug the claw lightly into the ground and cracked the whip to intertwine with Kane's hand above his saber. The iron lace that guides the energy would only singe hair unless she pulled. With a hiss Lilith spin kicked at Kane's feet. When she spoke with a small grunt and moan the scent of flowers filled Kane's lungs*(read on pheromones)

If you Insist my dear.....

[roztheblindsith]

Kane closed his eyes, He sensed the moves Lilith was making, also the motions of the whip. He felt it rap around his hands , He opened his eyes quickly , he recovered from the spin kick and used the force to push Lilith away from him. Kane noticed that it was a little harder to breath, he ignored it , and dashed towards lilith at great speed sending a powerful kick to her chin , Kane spun around and sent a wave of the force smashing her into the ground . “come…” Kane took the Juyo stance to tighten his defense, he wouldn’t let his defense slip again.

[Belle Morte]

ooc: wait a second, if she's close to the ground for the spin kick with a line around your wrist and you push her, you'd create ligature marks on your wrist. In this case the energy would have sliced deeply through the flesh as it went through or second case scenario the hand is pointed out and the energy peels skin.
Also ineffective would be the kick to the chin since she's close to the ground and you would have to travel the small length of her body.
Then is the question of how he recovered from the spin kick. It would have knocked him on his back. Since he neither preforms a Sai technique to avoid the kick or Kip-ups to recover.
We are both learning the combat system but if you could some textual detail please. (if I sound crual I don't mean to)

[roztheblindsith]

OOC: it alright I understand, see I was confused because I thought the blades were only at the end of the whip. So I thought if i pushed you off I could break free , and when I did that. I forgot got to put that your character had gotten back up. and the part where Kane recovered , he used the force to flip himself back on to his feet. Sooo lets just say that Lilith was pushed back and the part were Kane kicked her in the chin didn’t happen so. Just go from the part where Kane went into the Juyo stance. does that sound good?

(and no problem, I started a actual fight so, its all good.)

[Belle Morte]

ooc: ok, but don't we need someone to judge the first round

[roztheblindsith]

OOC: uhhh not sure, lets just continue

[roztheblindsith]

Kane closed his eyes, He sensed the moves Lilith was making, also the motions of the whip. He felt it rap around his saber, He opened his eyes quickly ,pulled up on his lightsaber sending Lilith back up. Then Kane recovered from the spin kick by using the force to flip himself back on to his feet. Then used the force to push Lilith away from him. “come…” Kane took the Juyo stance to tighten his defense, he wouldn’t let his defense slip again.

OOC: alright i made the changes to the post so it should make more sence now, sorry about all that.

[Gh0st]

OOC: Don't mean to be a jerk or anything, but Roz where are you learning all these stances from, and how good are you at them are you? Just curious, I mean any idiot can take any stance he or she wants, but that doesn't mean there going to put it to it's true use. Also, only control yourself, you can say you kicked someone but don't say what happens to them.

[Cyberguy]

(Gh0st, don't instruct others)

[Belle Morte]

ooc: that's ok. It's refreshing to duel someone who doesn't pull an orbital bombardment from a million starships out of his ass. Still three rounds then fatality agreed

*Lilith preformed a kip-up and spun her saber as her claw talons sparkled with small hints of blood from Kane's thigh, the succubus spoke filling Kane's chest with the intoxicating scent even more as she kneeled down for a second rush*

You learn quick mortal, but true strength lays not in flesh but in the will......

*With the "Will" exaggerated Lilith launched forward and grabbed Kane's saber using the cortosis weaved talons to deactivate the blade and rammed her elbow into his throat below his jaw to knock the wind out of him. As her heels dug into his thigh her dark honey eye's bled to brown fire as the whip's iron lace slid down across the surface of Kane's robes burning tiny lines of singed material before she kicked off over his head using his wrist to wrap onto his back and slicing at his wrist in shallow cuts from the claw as it wraps around and releases. Lilith stays near Kane's ear and speaks before she kicks off his back into a somersault*

What's a matter my dear, Succubus got your lungs? *chaste kiss as she jumps off and seems to hover in mid-air*

ooc: I'm still in the air remember that, and your saber is disabled for awhile. Lets say one turn from the cortosis

[Gh0st]

(Cyberguy, I was just telling them what you told me. I was trying to help them like you were trying to help me. Remember?)

[Cyberguy]

(Still, that's my job. Not yours.)

[roztheblindsith]

OOC: haha I don’t think im going to be doing that any time soon

Kane felt strange, the feeling burned and relaxed him at the same time he tired to shake it off. “damn….” Before Kane could react, Lilith had already darted towards him and disabled his lightsaber with cortosis weave. “wha-” A sudden powerful blow slammed into Kane knocking the wind out of him. Kane stumbled back coughing up some blood , he saw the fiery whips come down he quickly stepped back but they still burned his robes , but Lilith still had the whip around him. She landed behind him cutting into his wrist , kanes blood dripped on to the ground. When Lilith kick off Kane stumbled forwards. Kane Turned around and feel to one knee panting hard. “whats going on with my body….” Kane started hearing a voice in the back of his head, there was a moment of silence. He got back up and looked at Lilith and grinned a small stream of blood ran down his chin. He dashed towards a wall and bent his legs and rocketed off at a great speed , lilith didn’t have much time to react when Kane sent his fist slamming into her, knocking her to the ground. Kane landed back on the ground , he was still panting hard from the last encounter.


OOC: Is there anyway I could get rid of the succubus thing???

[Jenno]

(OOC: Okay, I'm seeing some problems with this. So basically, Belle, you're control the actions of roz way too much. You can't say that his lightsaber is disabled, it doesn't work like that.

You're are sot of following the right structure, but you're just controlling a bit too much and that doesn't leave Roz with many options other than the ones you want him to take.

if you want to see a decent example, then here's a short thread between myself and phoenix from about 6 months ago:

swrponline.proboards23.com/index.cgi?board=onderon&action=display&thread=1148157689&page=1

That's to give you the basic outline. The plan with it is that you have to make compensations and so does the other person, you can't control their movements, but they also can't block every move that's thrown at you.

If anyone wants a practice with my weather it be one here (which will just be practice, wont have any affect on the story) or you want to practice IC then just pm me, Dueals are my favourite )